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<p>Grammar errata notes</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>== Minor grammar errors ==<br /> <br /> Page 1, &quot;Business Model,&quot; 2nd sentence: &quot;Our business model &lt;u&gt;is calls&lt;/u&gt; for an on-site crew of 12 skilled fabricators (currently we have recruited 3) ...&quot; Strike &quot;is.&quot;<br /> <br /> Page 3, &quot;Milestone Achievement,&quot; 2nd paragraph/chart descriptor: &quot;To remain on schedule, and to guarantee expanding earning potential&lt;u&gt; - &lt;/u&gt;the following numbers of prototypes (blue line -150 total, for 50 full product releases &lt;u&gt;(orange line)&lt;/u&gt;) should be achieved:&quot; ... Use a comma instead of a dash to delineate phrase; most professional writing styles call for nested parentheticals graduate (per level in) from ( to [ to { and matching closed }, ] and ).<br /> <br /> &quot;Keys to Success,&quot; 4th sentence: &quot;The keys to success are (1), recruiting skilled prototypers to accelerate development ; (2) optimization of production infrastructure and ergonomics within a 6 month period from Jan. 2012; (3) maintaining low development costs by &lt;u&gt;globalo&lt;/u&gt;, collaborative, open source product development; (4) in-house capacity for scrap metal melting and rolling - to reduce material costs to the price of scrap steel; (5) and eliminating energy costs via renewable bio-fuels and solar concentrator energy.&quot; The in-paragraph numbered list might work better formatted as a line-per-item numbered list (using OpenOffice&#039;s &#039;Numbering&#039; feature); &quot;globalo&quot; likely a typo for &quot;global.&quot; --[[User:Howard V. Agnew|Howard V. Agnew]] 01:38, 26 September 2011 (CEST)</div>

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