Talk:Nickel-Iron Battery/Research Development

Very good research work. Love the notes and analysis. A minor suggestion is to clean up links like http://www.nickel-iron-battery.com/ by putting them in brackets like this: [1]. Most of the URLs cited are not human memorable anyways, so why take up screen space with them? The "footnote" form of the links provided by MediaWiki is a good feature. - Mark J Norton

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Punctuation needs to be redone by the author of the last edit. There is none and it makes it difficult to tell where sentences start or finish. There are also spelling error that are in decipherable. The author needs to have a go at learning what capitalisation full stops and word spacing is all about. Otherwise its excellent research but I'm having trouble following it. Wesley bruce 20:07, 17 July 2011 (PDT)

Oh thanks, Wesley. Seen the note I added to the page. It was not intended to be a work of art, rather I was using the wiki as part of my workspace, integrating it into the process of what I was doing, instead of using it as a presentation space as is too often done, which in many cases omits important details. I believe that provides better transparency. Unfortunately some people are too afraid of being misinterpreted (as you are doing) or embarrassed to do this, which is partly why this place lacks transparency so badly. I have made a conscious decision not to spend much time on the OSE project anymore due to the management issues. Gregor 09:31, 18 July 2011 (PDT)