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=V9= | |||
https://docs.google.com/a/opensourceecology.org/document/d/12_oQz6Nau9C-AVxjGA5v1St-ryTquf4etJ7Lh9MyBJw/edit?usp=sharing_eid&ts=5767f421 | |||
=V8= | |||
https://docs.google.com/a/opensourceecology.org/document/d/1RkBxSdnWGwy8HUmPoUDHj5JNjsfVf_Sob4zxYIIX4e8/edit?usp=sharing_eid&ts=5749a91a | |||
=Storyboard= | |||
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1mxVh6ATdvY1tKpImXUxU5uMgKOXYvIrOGigPiDlTXBk/edit#gid=0 | |||
=v7= | |||
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16cN8YAsCirMZOCMLTnK4PogvLCFW-v70bKPHA6B0iDA/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a | |||
[[KS Script v7]] -mj | |||
=V6= | |||
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ekndFNXTKmB2KDJRCVoqcwQdvt4NcrC_Po-WbMYmCHA/edit?ts=5748c831 | |||
=v5= | |||
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g8tDtZOljB3j0StE8tBzvElwL3_ZzxljT72QHqOiM90/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a | |||
=v4= | |||
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mqOMp7WbXHyXeEtzNHsaLhRTqXAs9UanmeaHnG0WX78/edit?ts=574359a1 | |||
=v3= | |||
[[OBI Kickstarter Script v3]] | |||
=Notes= | |||
*End scene - the matrix last scene | |||
*wholesale hope | |||
*we realized that the only way we can have affordable housing is if people get involved. | |||
==Pure Passion== | |||
I'm passionate about self-determination - that we can live on this earth without hurting others. Self-determination drives me - and therefore drives me to enable everyone to be autonomous - so only then can we all get along well together. Hence the crazy experiments of local self-providing, without rejecting technology. The trick to communicating this is that people are in general slaves, and have not tasted the sweet taste of freedom. | |||
==Story== | |||
*We are known as the Mud Hut in our 10 mile radius. | |||
*I got my PhD in plasma physics, and discovered - that I was useless | |||
*I got my PhD in Open Source Hardware - and I discovered - that I want to join marcin. | |||
*So we got married. | |||
*i welcomed her to my apocalyptic nerd farm in the middle of nowhere, Missouri. | |||
*she tells me, "I'm not living in a mud but. I need a real house." So I dropped everything so I could keep her around. | |||
*when she arrived, at the end of a particularly harsh winter - we ended up staying in a motel until it warmed up. | |||
=Presentation= | =Presentation= | ||
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=Script= | =Script= | ||
==New== | |||
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[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OIWrLXwRGxABgf9tJNopk7dAU8nlxvPI5vRIDJ0aBWA/edit edit] | |||
==Old== | |||
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<iframe src="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DJ0PQcgUJBG2aoJ__XbnL60xQeTaqi1RTF7jgPMa2Kg/pub?embedded=true" height=500 width=700></iframe></html> | <iframe src="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DJ0PQcgUJBG2aoJ__XbnL60xQeTaqi1RTF7jgPMa2Kg/pub?embedded=true" height=500 width=700></iframe></html> | ||
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=Review Team - to be Invited= | =Review Team - to be Invited= | ||
Strategy - focus on writer/doers. Topgrade this list. Doers include tbose who are building, are SMEs in technologies involved. Combine SME/Blogger/Doer/Advisor/Project Contributor/Mouthpiece. Once we are media ready, start inviting people over. Invite media to the Nov event. Access to open Hardware expertise, Extreme Manufacturing (Wikipedia, I co-coined this word), and first access to the product launch, interview, early access to waiting list for house builds, and invitation to the Build for free, in person press conference during the Build. | Strategy - focus on writer/doers. Topgrade this list. Doers include tbose who are building, are SMEs in technologies involved. Combine SME/Blogger/Cultural Creator/Doer/Advisor/Project Contributor/Mouthpiece. Once we are media ready, start inviting people over. Invite media to the Nov event. Access to open Hardware expertise, Extreme Manufacturing (Wikipedia, I co-coined this word), and first access to the product launch, interview, early access to waiting list for house builds, and invitation to the Build for free, in person press conference during the Build. | ||
#[[Emily Aiken]] | |||
#[[Brian Beck]] | |||
#[[Cameron Herold]] | |||
#[[Colby Thomson]] | |||
#[[Chris Galusha]] | |||
#[[Dave Hakkens]] | |||
#[[Alicia Gibb]] | |||
#[[Joshua Pearce]] | |||
#[[Matthieu Lietaert]] - video | |||
#[[Jae Sabol]] | |||
#[[Mitch Joachim]] | |||
#[[Pragnya Alekal]] | |||
#[[Ceasar Harada]] | |||
#[[Sunny Bates]] | |||
#[[Luke Hutchinson]] | |||
#[[Esra'a]] | |||
#[[Paul Gardner Stephens]] | |||
#[[Renee Freedman]] | |||
#[[Robert Steele]] | |||
#[[Tom Rielly]] | |||
*[[Scott Mader]] | |||
*[[Dylan Charles]] - DIY that smashes debt barrier. | |||
*[[Cody Harrison]] | |||
*[[Frank Golbeck]] | |||
*[[Steve Quilley]] | |||
*[[Franz Nahrada]] | |||
*[[Jonathan Kocurek]] | |||
*[[Tom Griffing]] | |||
*[[John Kalish]] | *[[John Kalish]] | ||
*[[Eric Toensmeier]] - 5K FB | |||
*[[Frank Aragona]] | |||
*[[Andre Houssney]] | |||
*[[Thad Getterman]] | |||
*[[Thomas Culhane]] | |||
*[[Joseph Jackson]] - transhumanist angle | |||
*[[Dorn Cox]] - agriculture angle | |||
*[[Severinne]] | |||
*[[Scott Murray]] | |||
*[[Alejandro Aravena]] | *[[Alejandro Aravena]] | ||
*[[ | *[[Emmanuel Puybaret]] | ||
*[[ | |||
*[[Rich Hulskes]] - Wevolver | |||
*[[Bob Berkebile]] | *[[Bob Berkebile]] | ||
*[[Yorik VanHavre]] | *[[Yorik VanHavre]] | ||
*[[Pawel Sroczynski]] | *[[Pawel Sroczynski]] | ||
*[[Michel Bauwens]] | *[[Michel Bauwens]] | ||
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*[[TED Fellows]] | *[[TED Fellows]] | ||
*[[Spencer McCallum]] | *[[Spencer McCallum]] | ||
*[[Diego Footer]] | *[[Diego Footer]] | ||
*[[Jeff Moe]] | *[[Jeff Moe]] | ||
*[[Isaiah Slavetsky]] | *[[Isaiah Slavetsky]] | ||
*[[Dan]] - 3rd world angle. | *[[Dan]] - 3rd world angle. | ||
*[[Rob Beddingfield]] | *[[Rob Beddingfield]] | ||
*[[China singer]] | *[[China singer]] | ||
*[[Rob Kirk]] | *[[Rob Kirk]] | ||
*[[Ron Whitehurst]] - charcoal producing pellet stove/TEG/home shredder/pelletizer appliance. Perennial landscape for food and fuel, biogas. Produce awesome infographic. The incremental Eco Seed Home. | *[[Ron Whitehurst]] - charcoal producing pellet stove/TEG/home shredder/pelletizer appliance. Perennial landscape for food and fuel, biogas. Produce awesome infographic. The incremental Eco Seed Home. | ||
*[[William Bombardier]] | *[[William Bombardier]] | ||
*[[Peter McCoy]] | *[[Peter McCoy]] | ||
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*[[Julia Valentine]] | *[[Julia Valentine]] | ||
*[[Rasmus Kiehl]] | *[[Rasmus Kiehl]] | ||
*[[Jose Gomez Marquez]] | *[[Jose Gomez Marquez]] | ||
*[[Karien Bezuidenhuit]] | *[[Karien Bezuidenhuit]] | ||
*[[Mark Horner]] | *[[Mark Horner]] | ||
*[[Kavitha Swaminathan]] | *[[Kavitha Swaminathan]] | ||
*Hong Kong Jones | *Hong Kong Jones | ||
*[[Chris Agnos]] | *[[Chris Agnos]] | ||
*[[Phil Jorgensen]] | *[[Phil Jorgensen]] | ||
=Review Strategy= | =Review Strategy= | ||
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#Is the script interesting to our intended audience? How to improve it? | #Is the script interesting to our intended audience? How to improve it? | ||
#Does the script provide a convincing argument on feasibility? Should it be about proving feasibility, or about inspiring people? How important is convincing people about the feasibility? This goes back to our Audience - is the audience well-defined? | #Does the script provide a convincing argument on feasibility? Should it be about proving feasibility, or about inspiring people? How important is convincing people about the feasibility? This goes back to our Audience - is the audience well-defined? | ||
=Links= | |||
*[[OBI]] | |||
Latest revision as of 18:50, 20 June 2016
V9
V8
Storyboard
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1mxVh6ATdvY1tKpImXUxU5uMgKOXYvIrOGigPiDlTXBk/edit#gid=0
v7
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16cN8YAsCirMZOCMLTnK4PogvLCFW-v70bKPHA6B0iDA/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a KS Script v7 -mj
V6
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ekndFNXTKmB2KDJRCVoqcwQdvt4NcrC_Po-WbMYmCHA/edit?ts=5748c831
v5
v4
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mqOMp7WbXHyXeEtzNHsaLhRTqXAs9UanmeaHnG0WX78/edit?ts=574359a1
v3
Notes
- End scene - the matrix last scene
- wholesale hope
- we realized that the only way we can have affordable housing is if people get involved.
Pure Passion
I'm passionate about self-determination - that we can live on this earth without hurting others. Self-determination drives me - and therefore drives me to enable everyone to be autonomous - so only then can we all get along well together. Hence the crazy experiments of local self-providing, without rejecting technology. The trick to communicating this is that people are in general slaves, and have not tasted the sweet taste of freedom.
Story
- We are known as the Mud Hut in our 10 mile radius.
- I got my PhD in plasma physics, and discovered - that I was useless
- I got my PhD in Open Source Hardware - and I discovered - that I want to join marcin.
- So we got married.
- i welcomed her to my apocalyptic nerd farm in the middle of nowhere, Missouri.
- she tells me, "I'm not living in a mud but. I need a real house." So I dropped everything so I could keep her around.
- when she arrived, at the end of a particularly harsh winter - we ended up staying in a motel until it warmed up.
Presentation
Script
New
Old
Links
Review Team - to be Invited
Strategy - focus on writer/doers. Topgrade this list. Doers include tbose who are building, are SMEs in technologies involved. Combine SME/Blogger/Cultural Creator/Doer/Advisor/Project Contributor/Mouthpiece. Once we are media ready, start inviting people over. Invite media to the Nov event. Access to open Hardware expertise, Extreme Manufacturing (Wikipedia, I co-coined this word), and first access to the product launch, interview, early access to waiting list for house builds, and invitation to the Build for free, in person press conference during the Build.
- Emily Aiken
- Brian Beck
- Cameron Herold
- Colby Thomson
- Chris Galusha
- Dave Hakkens
- Alicia Gibb
- Joshua Pearce
- Matthieu Lietaert - video
- Jae Sabol
- Mitch Joachim
- Pragnya Alekal
- Ceasar Harada
- Sunny Bates
- Luke Hutchinson
- Esra'a
- Paul Gardner Stephens
- Scott Mader
- Dylan Charles - DIY that smashes debt barrier.
- Cody Harrison
- Frank Golbeck
- Steve Quilley
- Franz Nahrada
- Jonathan Kocurek
- Tom Griffing
- John Kalish
- Eric Toensmeier - 5K FB
- Frank Aragona
- Andre Houssney
- Thad Getterman
- Thomas Culhane
- Joseph Jackson - transhumanist angle
- Dorn Cox - agriculture angle
- Severinne
- Scott Murray
- Alejandro Aravena
- Emmanuel Puybaret
- Rich Hulskes - Wevolver
- Dan - 3rd world angle.
- Rob Beddingfield
- China singer
- Rob Kirk
- Ron Whitehurst - charcoal producing pellet stove/TEG/home shredder/pelletizer appliance. Perennial landscape for food and fuel, biogas. Produce awesome infographic. The incremental Eco Seed Home.
- Mark Horner
- Kavitha Swaminathan
- Hong Kong Jones
- Chris Agnos
- Phil Jorgensen
Review Strategy
The review of the script seeks for feedback on:
- Does the script fit our intended audience? Thus, audience definition must be clear. The intended audience is...Details of the different sectors. Review whether the sectors make sense. Are there ones we missed? Where do those sectors hang out?
- Is the script interesting to our intended audience? How to improve it?
- Does the script provide a convincing argument on feasibility? Should it be about proving feasibility, or about inspiring people? How important is convincing people about the feasibility? This goes back to our Audience - is the audience well-defined?