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Housing is expensive. Did you know that in 2013 the average price of a new home was $400,000? (Research average mortgage costs) This doesn't count financing - if you get a mortgage - or pay until death - you would be paying twice that. (Research this)
=V9=
https://docs.google.com/a/opensourceecology.org/document/d/12_oQz6Nau9C-AVxjGA5v1St-ryTquf4etJ7Lh9MyBJw/edit?usp=sharing_eid&ts=5767f421


Housing is the single largest cost of living - out of food, clothing, transportation. It's about 60- 70℅. Did you know that an avg American spends $1.2M over their entire life just to pay for housing, food, clothing, and transport? These are hljust basics - not counting anythinhlg else you want to do with your life.
=V8=
https://docs.google.com/a/opensourceecology.org/document/d/1RkBxSdnWGwy8HUmPoUDHj5JNjsfVf_Sob4zxYIIX4e8/edit?usp=sharing_eid&ts=5749a91a
=Storyboard=
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1mxVh6ATdvY1tKpImXUxU5uMgKOXYvIrOGigPiDlTXBk/edit#gid=0
=v7=
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16cN8YAsCirMZOCMLTnK4PogvLCFW-v70bKPHA6B0iDA/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a
[[KS Script v7]] -mj


This doesn't have to be.
=V6=
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ekndFNXTKmB2KDJRCVoqcwQdvt4NcrC_Po-WbMYmCHA/edit?ts=5748c831


First, subdivision land is expensive, $70k on average per house lot. There are many lots you can get if you don't get prime subdivision Dev land , urban or rural - that are $10k - or free in many blighted areas - such as KC or Detroit.
=v5=
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g8tDtZOljB3j0StE8tBzvElwL3_ZzxljT72QHqOiM90/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a


Theme there are other fees...
=v4=
Let's look at the actual costs of a house. That is the design and construction. The largest part of that is construction costs - $270k - and design is $15k on average.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mqOMp7WbXHyXeEtzNHsaLhRTqXAs9UanmeaHnG0WX78/edit?ts=574359a1


Our solution is the debt free, open source Seed Home. It can be built incrementally. Start with a core for $7k in materials for a 200 SF starter seed with all utilities included, and excavation/grading done. Bobcat operator per day is $500-$1000 if you wet hire - as little as $200 per day if you rent and transport your own bobcat.
=v3=
[[OBI Kickstarter Script v3]]


=Notes=
*End scene - the matrix last scene
*wholesale hope
*we realized that the only way we can have affordable housing is if people get involved.


==Pure Passion==
I'm passionate about self-determination - that we can live on this earth without hurting others. Self-determination drives me - and therefore drives me to enable everyone to be autonomous - so only then can we all get along well together. Hence the crazy experiments of local self-providing, without rejecting technology. The trick to communicating this is that people are in general slaves, and have not tasted the sweet taste of freedom.
==Story==
*We are known as the Mud Hut in our 10 mile radius.
*I got my PhD in plasma physics, and discovered - that I was useless
*I got my PhD in Open Source Hardware - and I discovered - that I want to join marcin.
*So we got married.
*i welcomed her to my apocalyptic nerd farm in the middle of nowhere, Missouri.
*she tells me, "I'm not living in a mud but. I need a real house." So I dropped everything so I could keep her around.
*when she arrived, at the end of a particularly harsh winter - we ended up staying in a motel until it warmed up.


=Presentation=
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=Script=
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=Links=  
=Links=  
*[[OBI]]
=Review Team - to be Invited=
Strategy - focus on writer/doers. Topgrade this list. Doers include tbose who are building, are SMEs in technologies involved. Combine SME/Blogger/Cultural Creator/Doer/Advisor/Project Contributor/Mouthpiece. Once we are media ready, start inviting people over. Invite media to the Nov event. Access to open Hardware expertise, Extreme Manufacturing (Wikipedia, I co-coined this word), and first access to the product launch, interview, early access to waiting list for house builds, and invitation to the Build for free, in person press conference during the Build.
#[[Emily Aiken]]
#[[Brian Beck]]
#[[Cameron Herold]]
#[[Colby Thomson]]
#[[Chris Galusha]]
#[[Dave Hakkens]]
#[[Alicia Gibb]]
#[[Joshua Pearce]]
#[[Matthieu Lietaert]] - video
#[[Jae Sabol]]
#[[Mitch Joachim]]
#[[Pragnya Alekal]]
#[[Ceasar Harada]]
#[[Sunny Bates]]
#[[Luke Hutchinson]]
#[[Esra'a]]
#[[Paul Gardner Stephens]]
#[[Renee Freedman]]
#[[Robert Steele]]
#[[Tom Rielly]]
*[[Scott Mader]]
*[[Dylan Charles]] - DIY that smashes debt barrier.
*[[Cody Harrison]]
*[[Frank Golbeck]]
*[[Steve Quilley]]
*[[Franz Nahrada]]
*[[Jonathan Kocurek]]
*[[Tom Griffing]]
*[[John Kalish]]
*[[Eric Toensmeier]] - 5K FB
*[[Frank Aragona]]
*[[Andre Houssney]]
*[[Thad Getterman]]
*[[Thomas Culhane]]
*[[Joseph Jackson]] - transhumanist angle
*[[Dorn Cox]] - agriculture angle
*[[Severinne]]
*[[Scott Murray]]
*[[Alejandro Aravena]]
*[[Emmanuel Puybaret]]
*[[Rich Hulskes]] - Wevolver
*[[Bob Berkebile]]
*[[Yorik VanHavre]]
*[[Pawel Sroczynski]]
*[[Michel Bauwens]]
*[[Dave Dobbins]]
*[[TED Fellows]]
*[[Spencer McCallum]]
*[[Diego Footer]]
*[[Jeff Moe]]
*[[Isaiah Slavetsky]]
*[[Dan]] - 3rd world angle.
*[[Rob Beddingfield]]
*[[China singer]]
*[[Rob Kirk]]
*[[Ron Whitehurst]] - charcoal producing pellet stove/TEG/home shredder/pelletizer appliance. Perennial landscape for food and fuel, biogas. Produce awesome infographic. The incremental Eco Seed Home.
*[[William Bombardier]]
*[[Peter McCoy]]
*[[Larry Santoyo]]
*[[Angel Rodriguez]]
*[[Julia Valentine]]
*[[Rasmus Kiehl]]
*[[Jose Gomez Marquez]]
*[[Karien Bezuidenhuit]]
*[[Mark Horner]]
*[[Kavitha Swaminathan]]
*Hong Kong Jones
*[[Chris Agnos]]
*[[Phil Jorgensen]]
=Review Strategy=
The review of the script seeks for feedback on:
#Does the script fit our intended audience? Thus, audience definition must be clear. The intended audience is...Details of the different sectors. Review whether the sectors make sense. Are there ones we missed? Where do those sectors hang out?
#Is the script interesting to our intended audience? How to improve it?
#Does the script provide a convincing argument on feasibility? Should it be about proving feasibility, or about inspiring people? How important is convincing people about the feasibility? This goes back to our Audience - is the audience well-defined?
=Links=
*[[OBI]]
*[[OBI]]

Latest revision as of 18:50, 20 June 2016

V9

https://docs.google.com/a/opensourceecology.org/document/d/12_oQz6Nau9C-AVxjGA5v1St-ryTquf4etJ7Lh9MyBJw/edit?usp=sharing_eid&ts=5767f421

V8

https://docs.google.com/a/opensourceecology.org/document/d/1RkBxSdnWGwy8HUmPoUDHj5JNjsfVf_Sob4zxYIIX4e8/edit?usp=sharing_eid&ts=5749a91a

Storyboard

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1mxVh6ATdvY1tKpImXUxU5uMgKOXYvIrOGigPiDlTXBk/edit#gid=0

v7

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16cN8YAsCirMZOCMLTnK4PogvLCFW-v70bKPHA6B0iDA/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a KS Script v7 -mj

V6

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ekndFNXTKmB2KDJRCVoqcwQdvt4NcrC_Po-WbMYmCHA/edit?ts=5748c831

v5

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g8tDtZOljB3j0StE8tBzvElwL3_ZzxljT72QHqOiM90/edit#heading=h.5d6igsvb471a

v4

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mqOMp7WbXHyXeEtzNHsaLhRTqXAs9UanmeaHnG0WX78/edit?ts=574359a1

v3

OBI Kickstarter Script v3

Notes

  • End scene - the matrix last scene
  • wholesale hope
  • we realized that the only way we can have affordable housing is if people get involved.

Pure Passion

I'm passionate about self-determination - that we can live on this earth without hurting others. Self-determination drives me - and therefore drives me to enable everyone to be autonomous - so only then can we all get along well together. Hence the crazy experiments of local self-providing, without rejecting technology. The trick to communicating this is that people are in general slaves, and have not tasted the sweet taste of freedom.

Story

  • We are known as the Mud Hut in our 10 mile radius.
  • I got my PhD in plasma physics, and discovered - that I was useless
  • I got my PhD in Open Source Hardware - and I discovered - that I want to join marcin.
  • So we got married.
  • i welcomed her to my apocalyptic nerd farm in the middle of nowhere, Missouri.
  • she tells me, "I'm not living in a mud but. I need a real house." So I dropped everything so I could keep her around.
  • when she arrived, at the end of a particularly harsh winter - we ended up staying in a motel until it warmed up.

Presentation

Script

New

edit

Old

edit

Links

Review Team - to be Invited

Strategy - focus on writer/doers. Topgrade this list. Doers include tbose who are building, are SMEs in technologies involved. Combine SME/Blogger/Cultural Creator/Doer/Advisor/Project Contributor/Mouthpiece. Once we are media ready, start inviting people over. Invite media to the Nov event. Access to open Hardware expertise, Extreme Manufacturing (Wikipedia, I co-coined this word), and first access to the product launch, interview, early access to waiting list for house builds, and invitation to the Build for free, in person press conference during the Build.

  1. Emily Aiken
  2. Brian Beck
  3. Cameron Herold
  4. Colby Thomson
  5. Chris Galusha
  6. Dave Hakkens
  7. Alicia Gibb
  8. Joshua Pearce
  9. Matthieu Lietaert - video
  10. Jae Sabol
  11. Mitch Joachim
  12. Pragnya Alekal
  13. Ceasar Harada
  14. Sunny Bates
  15. Luke Hutchinson
  16. Esra'a
  17. Paul Gardner Stephens
  1. Renee Freedman
  2. Robert Steele
  3. Tom Rielly








  • Rob Kirk
  • Ron Whitehurst - charcoal producing pellet stove/TEG/home shredder/pelletizer appliance. Perennial landscape for food and fuel, biogas. Produce awesome infographic. The incremental Eco Seed Home.

Review Strategy

The review of the script seeks for feedback on:

  1. Does the script fit our intended audience? Thus, audience definition must be clear. The intended audience is...Details of the different sectors. Review whether the sectors make sense. Are there ones we missed? Where do those sectors hang out?
  2. Is the script interesting to our intended audience? How to improve it?
  3. Does the script provide a convincing argument on feasibility? Should it be about proving feasibility, or about inspiring people? How important is convincing people about the feasibility? This goes back to our Audience - is the audience well-defined?

Links

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